{"id":297,"date":"2017-10-05T14:11:10","date_gmt":"2017-10-05T20:11:10","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/briancroxall.net\/f17dh\/?page_id=297"},"modified":"2017-11-01T08:59:13","modified_gmt":"2017-11-01T14:59:13","slug":"puzzling-out-duffys-poetry","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/briancroxall.net\/f17dh\/assignments\/puzzling-out-duffys-poetry\/","title":{"rendered":"Puzzling Out Duffy&#8217;s Poetry"},"content":{"rendered":"<h2>Rationale<\/h2>\n<p>As we saw in a letter to her publisher, Carol Ann Duffy felt that her fifth book, <em>The World\u2019s Wife <\/em>(TWW), \u201cis not a \u2018normal\u2019 poetry collection by me\u2014it\u2019s close to popular entertainment.\u201d Here, then, is a real research question: is she right?<\/p>\n<h2>The Nitty Gritty<\/h2>\n<p>You will write a six-page-minimum (more is fine!) paper that examines TWW in relation to Duffy\u2019s first collection, <em>Standing Female Nude<\/em> (SFN). In a sense, your argument will be to agree or disagree with Duffy\u2019s assessment: are TWW and SFN similar to one another or are they radically different? Either is an equally valid choice, and since I haven\u2019t ever tried this before I don\u2019t have a preconceived notion of the \u201canswer.\u201d To orient your writing, you could think of this as a \u201ccompare and contrast\u201d paper. Make sure that you do not simply summarize what happens in the poems; instead, focus on one theme or aspect of the two books to make your argument.<\/p>\n<p>It is important to remember that you are making <strong>an argument<\/strong>, something that you will need to persuasively demonstrate. You should draw your evidence for this argument via \u201cclose reading,\u201d an analysis of the language and techniques present within the poems and volumes. Again, it\u2019s not enough to consider the overarching themes or organization of the two volumes. Instead you are required to <strong>examine the language of at least one poem from <em>each <\/em>volume<\/strong>. These details will comprise the evidence for your argument.<\/p>\n<p>You not only need an appropriate amount of evidence but you must also spend an appropriate amount of time <strong>demonstrating and explaining<\/strong> how your evidence adds up to your interpretation. Help your reader understand how the dots connect in your argument. What this means is that when you use quotations from the text <strong>(and you must)<\/strong>, you must also take the time to make clear how that quotation relates to your larger argument. This is not as simple as it sounds.<\/p>\n<p>You are <em>not<\/em> required to use external sources for this assignment, although you may do so if you would like. Whether or not you use external sources, <strong>you will need a Works Cited list<\/strong> <strong>in correct,<\/strong> <strong>MLA 8<sup>th<\/sup> edition style<\/strong>. Feel free to use <a href=\"http:\/\/easybib.com\/\">EasyBib<\/a> to make this process easier.<\/p>\n<p>Papers must be emailed to me as PDFs by the beginning of class on <span style=\"color: red; text-decoration: line-through;\"><span style=\"color: black;\"><strong>Tuesday, 31 October<\/strong><\/span><\/span> <strong>Thursday, 2 November<\/strong>. Please name files in the following format: <span style=\"color: red; text-decoration: line-through;\"><span style=\"color: black;\">[last name]-duffy.pdf (e.g., croxall-duffy.pdf)<\/span><\/span>[random 6-digit number]-duffy.pdf (e.g., 634891-duffy.pdf). The papers must be in 12-point Times New Roman font and double-spaced. It must have a title and 1\u201d margins on all sides.<\/p>\n<h2>Grading<\/h2>\n<p>I will grade these papers simply with letter grades. A+ = 100; A= 95; A- = 92; B+= 88; etc. I will focus on a few discreet things in grading:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Appropriateness of scope: Here, I am looking to see that you understand what can be persuasively covered in the page limits. A topic that is too big (e.g., the role of women in Duffy\u2019s poetry) may result in a poorly developed essay. Something more manageable (e.g., the role of mothers in Duffy\u2019s poetry) allows you more room to build an argument.<\/li>\n<li>The<strong> thesis for the essay should state an argument, not just a topic.<\/strong> This \u2013 \u201cMy essay will consider the roles of mothers in Duffy\u2019s poetry.\u201d \u2013 is a topic. This \u2013 \u201cAlthough Duffy believes her poetry to have changed from <em>Mean Time <\/em>to <em>The World\u2019s Wife<\/em>, her depiction of mothers within both texts leads the reader to doubt the poet\u2019s claim.\u201d \u2013 is an argument. One way to determine whether you are presenting a topic or an argument is to ask yourself, \u201cCould a person reasonably argue against what I am saying?\u201d If the answer is \u201cno,\u201d then you probably don\u2019t have an argument. Demonstrating the validity of your thesis should be the goal of the paper and thus, each paragraph.<\/li>\n<li>Use of evidence: It\u2019s not a persuasive argument if you don\u2019t have evidence to prove it. <strong>This essay should consist of a series of close readings<\/strong>, the analysis of which builds to prove your argument. <strong>You can\u2019t do this without substantially quoting the text.<\/strong> The quotations you use should be smoothly introduced by and integrated into your own prose (the proverbial quotation sandwich). Furthermore, you should clearly and effectively provide analysis of the quotations, tracing for the reader how the language of the text connects to your larger thesis (A \u2192 B \u2192 C \u2192 D). Please note that specialized poetry language is <em>not<\/em> necessary to do this well. Just help me see what you\u2019re seeing; if you know the technical term, great!<\/li>\n<li>Prose and organizational effectiveness: This is a writing assignment, so the <strong>quality of your writing is at stake<\/strong>. The grammar and spelling of your paper should be flawless. It should be possible for the reader to see why your paper is organized in the way that it is and that this organization contributes to the rhetorical power of your argument. Finally, your paper should make correct use of MLA style.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<h2>Writing Center<\/h2>\n<p>The <a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.byu.edu\/\">BYU Writing Center<\/a> is an excellent resource for you as you\u2019re working on any stage of your paper. In fact, I think seeking this sort of feedback is so important that I will award you 5 extra points if you bring a draft of your paper there. That works out to a 3.33% increase, which is the same thing as moving from a B to a B+.<\/p>\n<p>Be sure to ask your tutor to notify me at <a href=\"#\" data-cx=\"G12BE76Kxbeyz3tGtMU+VCLaU1298V0LNsfrc2EohDFtiB900jHJhLVFj54yTqYSa\/KhBfSrR5bxFcjAQwXAp8ztyAWCpsCwcAi04g==\" data-cxm=\"secure\" data-cxk=\"c7ac18dfbbea4d7a9198149d310bcc751a6b59f56a7e0dc0086b4b25caa56070\" data-cxi=\"10000\" class=\"cryptx-link\">brian [dot] croxall [at] byu [dot] edu<\/a>. They will send me an outline of the tutoring session, but what I really care about is your attending.<\/p>\n<p>The Writing Center can get very busy at different points in the semester. You should consider <a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.byu.edu\/appointment\/\">making an appointment<\/a> sooner rather than later. Please note that you should have time to do this during our regularly scheduled class times in the week of of 23 October.<\/p>\n<h2>Credits<\/h2>\n<p>This assignment was designed by <a href=\"http:\/\/www.briancroxall.net\/\">Brian Croxall<\/a> and is licensed with a Creative Commons BY (CC-BY) license.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Rationale As we saw in a letter to her publisher, Carol Ann Duffy felt that her fifth book, The World\u2019s Wife (TWW), \u201cis not a \u2018normal\u2019 poetry collection by me\u2014it\u2019s close to popular entertainment.\u201d Here, then, is a real research question: is she right? 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