{"id":533,"date":"2019-03-04T11:39:00","date_gmt":"2019-03-04T18:39:00","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/briancroxall.net\/w19dh\/?page_id=533"},"modified":"2019-03-27T13:26:02","modified_gmt":"2019-03-27T19:26:02","slug":"puzzling-out-duffys-poetry","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/briancroxall.net\/w19dh\/assignments\/puzzling-out-duffys-poetry\/","title":{"rendered":"Puzzling Out Duffy&#8217;s Poetry"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Rationale<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">As we get closer to our final\nproject\u2014drafting portions of a publishable article about Carol Ann Duffy\u2019s\nfirst five volumes of poetry\u2014we need to start thinking about the arguments that\nwe can make about whether or not <em>The\nWorld\u2019s Wife<\/em> is a \u201c\u2018normal\u2019 poetry collection\u201d in her oeuvre. As always,\nour research question remains, \u201cIs she right?\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>The Nitty Gritty<\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">You will write a six-page-minimum (more\nis fine!) paper that examines TWW in relation to <em>one <\/em>of Duffy\u2019s other collections: <em>Standing Female Nude, Selling Manhattan, The Other Country, <\/em>or <em>Mean Time<\/em>. In a sense, your argument\nwill be to agree or disagree with Duffy\u2019s assessment: are, for example, TWW and\nSFN similar to one another or are they radically different? Either is an\nequally valid choice. To orient your writing, you could think of this as a\n\u201ccompare and contrast\u201d paper. Make sure that\nyou do not simply summarize what happens in the poems; instead, focus on one\ntheme or aspect of the two books to make your argument.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">It is important to remember that you\nare making <strong>an argument<\/strong>, something\nthat you will need to persuasively demonstrate. You should draw your evidence\nfor this argument via \u201cclose reading,\u201d an analysis of the language and\ntechniques present within the poems and volumes. Again, it\u2019s not enough to\nconsider the overarching themes or organization of the two volumes. You are\nrequired to <strong>examine the language of at\nleast one poem from <em>each <\/em>volume in detail<\/strong>.\nThese details will comprise some of the evidence for your argument. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">You\nnot only need an appropriate amount of evidence but you must also spend an\nappropriate amount of time <strong>demonstrating and explaining<\/strong> how\nyour evidence adds up to your interpretation. Help your reader understand how\nthe dots connect in your argument. What this means is that when you use\nquotations from the text <strong>(and you must)<\/strong>,\nyou must also take the time to make clear how that quotation relates to your\nlarger argument. This is not as simple as it sounds.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">You\nare <em>not<\/em> required to use external\nsources for this assignment, although you may do so if you would like. Whether\nor not you use external sources, <strong>you\nwill need a Works Cited list<\/strong> <strong>in\ncorrect,<\/strong> <strong>MLA 8<sup>th<\/sup> edition style<\/strong>.\nFeel free to use <a href=\"http:\/\/easybib.com\/\">EasyBib<\/a> to make this\nprocess easier.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Papers must be emailed to me as PDFs by <strong>11:59pm on 4 April.<\/strong> Please name files in the following format: [last name]-duffy.pdf (e.g., <g class=\"gr_ gr_6 gr-alert gr_spell gr_inline_cards gr_run_anim ContextualSpelling ins-del multiReplace\" id=\"6\" data-gr-id=\"6\">croxall<\/g>-duffy.pdf). The papers must be in 12-point Times New Roman font and double-spaced. It must have a title and 1\u201d margins on all sides.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Grading <\/strong><\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">This\nassignment is worth 150 points. I will grade the papers simply with letter\ngrades. A+ = 100; A= 95; A- = 92; B+= 88; etc. I will focus on a few discreet\nthings in grading:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\"><li>Appropriateness of scope: Here, I am looking to see that you understand <strong>what can be persuasively covered in the page limits.<\/strong> A topic that is too big (e.g., the role of women in Duffy \u2019s poetry) may result in a poorly developed essay. Something more manageable      (e.g., the role of mothers in Duffy\u2019s poetry) allows you more room to build an argument. <\/li><\/ul>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\"><li>The<strong> thesis for the essay should state an argument, not just a topic.<\/strong>      This \u2013 \u201cMy essay will consider the roles of mothers in Duffy\u2019s poetry.\u201d\u2013 is a topic. This \u2013 \u201cAlthough Duffy believes her poetry to have changed from <em>Mean Time <\/em>to <em>The World\u2019s Wife<\/em>, her depiction of mothers within both texts leads the reader to doubt the poet\u2019s claim.\u201d \u2013is an argument. One way to determine whether you are presenting a topic or an argument is to ask yourself, \u201cCould a person reasonably argue against      what I am saying?\u201d If the answer is \u201cno,\u201d then you probably don\u2019t have an argument. Demonstrating the validity of your thesis should be the goal of the paper and, thus, each paragraph.<\/li><\/ul>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\"><li>Use of evidence: It\u2019s not a persuasive argument if you don\u2019t have evidence to prove it. <strong>This essay should consist of a series of close readings<\/strong>, the analysis of which builds to prove your argument. <strong>You can\u2019t do this without substantially quoting the text.<\/strong> The quotations you use should be smoothly introduced by and integrated into your own prose (the proverbial quotation sandwich). Furthermore, you should clearly and <g class=\"gr_ gr_275 gr-alert gr_gramm gr_hide gr_inline_cards gr_run_anim Style multiReplace replaceWithoutSep replaceWithoutSep\" id=\"275\" data-gr-id=\"275\">effectively      provide<\/g> analysis of the quotations, tracing for the reader how the language of the text connects to your larger thesis (A \u00e0 B \u00e0 C \u00e0 D). Please note that specialized poetry language is <em>not<\/em> necessary to do this well. Just help me see what you\u2019re seeing; if you know the technical term, great! <\/li><\/ul>\n\n\n\n<ul class=\"wp-block-list\"><li>Prose and organizational effectiveness: This is a writing assignment, so the <strong>quality of your writing is at stake<\/strong>. The grammar and spelling      of your paper should be flawless. It should be possible for the reader to see why your paper is organized in the way that it is and that this organization contributes to the rhetorical power of your argument. Finally, your paper should make correct use of MLA style.<\/li><\/ul>\n\n\n\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\"><strong>Writing Center<\/strong><\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">The <a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.byu.edu\/\">BYU\nWriting Center<\/a> is an excellent resource for you as you\u2019re working on any stage of your\npaper. In fact, I think seeking this sort of feedback is so important that <strong>I\nwill award you 5 extra points<\/strong> if you bring a draft of your paper there.\nThat works out to a 3.33% increase, which is the same thing as moving from a B\nto a B+.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Be sure to\nask your tutor to notify me at <a href=\"#\" data-cx=\"+m6\/LClYeC1AsqhaKG3ber4oOLN2jvPXqE0fwUJMrGnaKfbApKNFMQruZntn3vXsGabEPCpp3CVFoVwUq99e4m6VqtDkb2bdXo0Jgg==\" data-cxm=\"secure\" data-cxk=\"eb66ce9219c3510d516dfab0679ef0ef9c8b3de81e63e24ca3dcecad821fee24\" data-cxi=\"10000\" class=\"cryptx-link\">brian [dot] croxall [at] byu [dot] edu<\/a>. They will send me an outline of\nthe tutoring session, but what I really care about is your attending. The\nWriting Center can get very busy at different points in the semester. You\nshould consider <a href=\"http:\/\/writingcenter.byu.edu\/appointment\/\">making\nan appointment<\/a> sooner rather than later. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<h2 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Credits<\/h2>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">This assignment was designed by <a href=\"http:\/\/www.briancroxall.net\/\">Brian Croxall<\/a> and is licensed with a Creative <g class=\"gr_ gr_5 gr-alert gr_spell gr_inline_cards gr_run_anim ContextualSpelling ins-del multiReplace\" id=\"5\" data-gr-id=\"5\">Commons BY<\/g> (CC-BY) license. <\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Rationale As we get closer to our final project\u2014drafting portions of a publishable article about Carol Ann Duffy\u2019s first five volumes of poetry\u2014we need to start thinking about the arguments that we can make about whether or not The World\u2019s Wife is a \u201c\u2018normal\u2019 poetry collection\u201d in her oeuvre. 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